2017年12月manbetapp作文考前冲刺：毕业生心理健康

　　Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic How toimprove the graduates’ mental health. Your essayshould start with a brief description of the picture.You should write at least 150 words but no morethan 200 words.

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　　How to improve the graduates’ mental health

　　Graduates’ mental health has been playing anincreasingly important role in the daily life. Actually, itis widely accepted that it has gained growingpopularity among persons in all walks of life.However, in the season of graduation, it’s reportedsome cases of self-killing or mental disorder stillhappened.

　　Obviously, graduates face various kinds of pressure. When graduates confront with greatpressure, the best method is to communicate with friends or family members to unburdenthe feelings. And the universities and colleges should also pay more attention to graduates’mental health and take effective action such as providing psychological service for studentshelping them to deal with mental problems. From the perspective of parents, they should caremore about their kids’ mental health, too. Though the parents cannot write the dissertationfor the graduates, nor can they find a job, they can communicate with their kids and helpthem to figure out the reasons for the difficulties.

　　From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can freeourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions. For example, if you have pains orpuzzles in mind, finding a friend to express is a good way to release pressure. Certainly, thereis no doubt that further attention will be paid to this issue.